I can tell you've spent a bit of time on this! A lot of these guys havent made films before and obviously cannot tell how much work and technique is involved to get up to freddie's level. You just need to watch and make more videos! Learn better shot continuity as a lot of people have said as well as better camera work. Visually It looks great though.
My two biggest things are audio (GET better mics, both directional and the ones that you clip on actors. Right now it just sounds so shot-with-my-moms-camera)
and acting. They dont seem like professionals at all, they need to improve a lot.
Love the end credits though, did you do that?
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